"Disappointing - you've done MUCH better work than this in earlier papers, Krista. Repetition, redundancy, wordiness, tense inconsistency, punctuation errors - all are very noticeable. There's also a distinctly preachy tone, esp. in the conclusion - not really appropriate for academic writing."

I think it's time I threw my dreams out the window for good. I'll never be a writer.


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